Tears must fall
Tearsmust fallto cleansemy heartSoul shineswith theirbrillianceSpiritsparklescoming cleanBody shakeswith their poweras I sitand sob for hoursTears must fallto ease the burdenof all in life that is...
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This works well in its shape being almost tear-drop Tears are cleansing - but sometimes they burn too; very nicely done."Write the bad things that are done to you in sand, but write the good things...
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I must admit I find this so true...reminds me of some lyrics form a long forgotten song..'Have a good cry, wash out oyur soul..'Sometimes it is very much needed..Good write Tal
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Tears are such multi-purpose little things..this one is felt...and your "tears" touch me. Beautifully sad, and sadly touching my sweet friend..sioux
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sometimes tears must fall ... and sometimes, it is too unbearable to give in to them ... but either way, you've captured the cleansing essence of tears quite well in this, raven ... nicely done ...
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Yes...sometimes tears can wash more than just the eyes...well expressed, Raven...Exit light...Enter night...Take my hand...We're off to never-never land...Welcome to...The Maelstrom...
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